Since I'm pretty sure this one's not going to make the cut,
I offer you a glimpse into the worst of what I've been writing these past few weeks.
Trying to put together a manuscript that should take most people a year... in 3 months?
Sooooo me. HA!
You'll all come buy the book for, say, $11.95, right?! :)
SYMPHONIA
"The stains will require explanation" -Jon Woodward
Musicians are people you pick up
Off the street in Glasgow
Honest instruments, sideways flapping
through slender music
You take them back to your kitchen--
they wash dishes and offer legal advice,
Convert you to their six-string religion,
Each string a tenant of accumulated sound
The supreme truth being
that yesterday contains the original experience
though it never outlives a lonely whistle,
Reasoning of the mouth
And the night eats up the spectrum of B Flat Major
And their laughter eats up half the house
And their stories go further than lyrics
And their sleep goes deeper than an empty bed
Clothes closed up the middle
with stitches like burst bagpipes.
They are plaid
They are felt
They are boot heel black
on the blue kitchen chairs
Now they're eating shredded coconut by the handfuls
Coconut in their mouths
Coconut in their beards
Coconut on the smiling stone floor
And this ends by taking the top off a circle.
~Jennifer P.
*and remember....copyrighted---yadda, yadda, yadda.....just because it might not make the cut doesn't mean that it's not still mine and won't be chopped up and used as pieces in other poems. I call the ones like that my "poetry casseroles".
Thanks for reading. Now move along....wait--say something first....then move along :).
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12 comments:
My mind flipped through pictured scenes like FFW a movie.
It was a fun ride :D
........moving along.
I just sat here and read this twice and let my mind picture each line as a scene in my head.
Love it!
So, just to stick my nose where it may not belong. Have you ever thought of teaching? Honestly if I had a junior high or high school teacher who had the passion and love for writing like you do it may have made a difference in how I felt about it. You would be great.
Plus you would totally be the cool teacher everyone hoped to get. :)
I's true, that thing Carrie said about being a teacher...I had a creative writing teacher in high school and he made a big difference in my writing and how I looked at other people's writing. You write beautifully.
I hope you keep the coconut "casserole" bit and use it someday in a poem all about food. :)
Poetry casserole and 1234
a needed break from the doldrum of my morning. Plain white T and lukewarm coffee. Throw in some White Stripes (love 'em). A sniffle, a sigh, a quaint chuckle at myshelf and back to work. Thanks, CG......and yes.....$11.95 would be a steal.
As a musician, thanks. Besides certain sacred places and personal prayer music has taken me closer to heaven than anything. TINIEL xo
I love all your writing:-)
I'm no poet or well read girl. But that's a very nice one Jenn! I like how some words that don't usually go together can still portray a perfect picture like"They are boot heel black on the blue kitchen chairs"
I love it!
Good job and good luck on the 12months work crammed in 3months!
Did I miss a previous announcement about a book deal? This post sounds very promising. I would agree that $11.95 would be a steal -- especially if you put one of your model portfolio pictures on the book jacket.
A poetry book? Woohoo! Good luck picking and choosing and refining and mixing and chopping and choosing! I look forward to an autographed copy someday!
Although I like the entire work, I particularly enjoyed the six-string religion couplet. If the poem doesn't make it I would hope that this will live on. Keep 'em coming!
Jennifer P. writes poetry. Wow! I'm impressed.
You've got mad, mad skillz. Every poem that I try to write turns into a bad limerick. It is not pretty.
I would totally buy your book...especially if some of your "poetry casseroles" are included. :)
-Francesca
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